“There are many ideas or discussions on the Internet regarding immigrants and yet until now there is still no real solution.” This is an opening sentence from the argumentative essay I wrote last semester. A general phrase that can address the topic. Thinking back to the phrase, I realize that there are no attention-getting phrases or slogans. It's totally boring from start to finish. However, I am able to learn a better way to develop my essay. One of them is to include more emotions in my essay which can be called pathos. A successful essay must have three categories: logical, emotional, and credibility, also known as logos, pathos, and ethos. These three categories support each other so that the sage can live. Furthermore, logos seem to be a strong point for me because they are a persuasive and argumentative part of the essay. The logos is known as a bony skeleton that connects the whole essay together. They are the main ideas and information about what the reader is trying to understand. However, what good are bones without their flesh, so pathos is the flesh that ...